The name of my article is "Luv 2 txt" and it is on the site teenink.com. The author of the story is Christina C. from Hopdale, MA. The opening paragraph in the story is all about texing itself, the setting is in a class room in the middle of a very boring class. It has a girl in the class room slowly sneaking in her backpack to get her phone to text her mom to tell her soccer practise is canceled. She says she slowly texts "sccer canceled! pick^ @2 thx <3",>
The opening paragraph did catch my attention in many ways because i text alot but not to much in school because all of my friends I text are with me. The main reason that it caught my attention is because I seen myself in these situations before trying to send that quick message in class even though we arent supposed to, while trying not to get caught by the teacher.
This article consists of 6 paragraphs, all of the paragraphs relate to the thesis some how. The writer connects the thesis to these paragraphs in different ways. This story is based on the writers personal experienses and he dosent refer to any resourses.
The author explains many sides to the arguement, one is hers where she thinks its great to text and loves it. But she also mentions how she just missed 2 minutes of her teachers lecture and she is ruining her vocabulary as many parents say as well as teachers. The writer also has a good pont from her side of view as well. The writer says how easy it is to just text and only take one minute where she could have gotten up and went to call and taken like at least 5 minutes.
The conclusion was very effective, it said how texting ruined vocabuary and for the ending she said "so before you hit send think about what you have just written, and maybe reconsider". Over all this article was very affective and it had a good perpose.
http://www.teenink.com/Opinion/article/78701/Luv-2-Txt/
Monday, May 4, 2009
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